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Twilight came to slowly, the weight of the Tiara of Magic on her head confusing her before her memory of what had happened moments ago had returned.

The Doctor had already awoken, and was now happily running from one unconscious pony to the next, taking readings from his sonic screwdriver.

"Brilliant!" he beamed, seeing that the six mares were stirring. "I almost don't believe it! All the Ponyville ponies are safe, completely unharmed with no signs of alien influence!"

"You mean…it worked?" Twilight asked.

"Wonderfully!" he replied, gleefully jumping around the room, giggling to himself.

"I think he got a little too much of Pinkie's Element," said Rainbow Dash.

"No, silly-filly!" said Pinkie Pie, joining the Doctor as he bounced, "It's juuuust right!"

The other five mares couldn't help but laugh at the two ponies' antics. The Doctor calmed down soon afterward, but Pinkie continued on, not caring that she was alone in her frivolity.

"Congratulations, Doctor." Celestia's kindly voice turned their attention to the doorway she and her sister were walking through, prompting the seven ponies to quickly bow. "I must admit, we were worried whether your plan would succeed or not."

Luna scoffed at this. "You were worried, sister; I was telling you everything would be fine."

"Either way," Celestia laughed, "you've defended Equestria from a great danger, and for that, we are in your debt."

"It was my pleasure, your highnesses." said the Doctor, dipping his head.

"Ooh! Ooh! Ooh!" Pinkie Pie appeared between them, bouncing excitedly. "I know how we can thank him! A PARTY!!"


By the time the evening arrived, all of Ponyville had prepared for the celebration. Many ponies had tried to bring gifts, but when the Doctor politely refused them, they returned with the next best thing: food.

The Doctor had eaten at parties on hundreds of planets, but the Ponyville cuisine surprised him. Everything tasted spectacularly delicious – especially the bananas, which he requested to have several crates full of to take aboard the TARDIS.

Throughout the night, ponies crowded around him, asking him questions about himself and how he saved them. The six Element-bearers also had their own share of topics they wished to be cleared up.

"So Doc," Applejack said, "When you came on into town, why did ya show me a blank card?"

The Doctor nodded in acknowledgement as he finished his cupcake and gave a compliment to Mr. and Mrs. Cake, who had made it their job to make sure that his plate was never empty. "Actually, Applejack, it wasn't blank – well, it wasn't supposed to be." He dug into his new saddlebags (the only gift he had accepted, as they were designed by Rarity and she wouldn't take no for an answer) and pulled out the card. "This is my psychic paper. Says anything I want it to. It's a very nifty little thing; I've been thrown in jail a lot less since I started carrying it around."

"So, then how was she able to see through it?" Rainbow Dash asked. "I mean, it fooled Twilight, and she's the nerdiest of us all."

"Well, she's the Element of Honesty, isn't she? Looks like that also makes her a living lie detector."

The night carried on, and soon thoughts of bed could no longer be ignored and slowly the party began to dissipate.

The Doctor had slipped out amidst the clean-up and stood on the hill where he had parked the TARDIS. The sun had not risen just yet; the stars and moon were shining their last before the new day.

His eyes were closed as the blue box hummed softly next to him. He knew that part of travelling and meeting new people was coming up, the part that never failed to make him anxious because the result was never certain: the inevitable question.

"You're leaving?"

The Doctor turned to see the six mares, along with the two princesses, had gathered behind him, all with the same sad look.

He gave them a soft smile. "Yep; I don't make a habit of staying in one place too long. The universe isn't going to explore itself, you know."

"But you've barely been here a day," Twilight pleaded. "You're welcome to stay as long as you want."

"Twilight…" the Doctor said slowly, "There are millions of people out there, all waiting for a knight in shining armor to step in and save them, and all they're ever going to get is a daft old man in a stolen box, or nothing. No matter how much I want to stay, I can't abandon them."

The groups' eyes lowered in disappointment. "So…this is goodbye?" Fluttershy asked, tearing up.

"Looks like it." The Doctor's expression suddenly turned sly. "Unless, of course, you want to come with me."

The mares' heads shot up. "You mean it?!" Rainbow said excitedly.

"You've been inside. I could fit all of Ponyville if I wanted to."

The mares gave cries of joy and shared high-hooves, but Twilight's expression suddenly faltered. "But I have to manage the library…and Applejack has to help Big Macintosh at Sweet Apple Acres, and Rarity has her boutique, and…we all have responsibilities here." She sighed. "I'm sorry, Doctor, but…I'm afraid we can't."

The Doctor merely shrugged at this. "Alright, I understand. You can't just drop everything to go adventuring." He opened the door to the TARDIS and stepped halfway in. "Of course, she does also travel through time, but it's not like that changes anything…"

Twilight blinked. "Wait, what was that?"

The Doctor shrugged again, his confident smirk growing. "Oh, I was just saying that the TARDIS is a time machine, so we could take a trip around the solar system and be back in time for tea, but you've already said you can't go, so I'll just –"

The six mares crowded the doorway with huge smiles on their faces. The Doctor laughed. "I'll take that as a yes!"

Twilight bounced around, giddy as a schoolfilly. "Yes! Yes! Yes!" She stopped a split second before colliding with Celestia. "Um – I mean, if it's okay with you, Princess Celestia."

The Princess smiled warmly. "It's not my decision, my faithful student. I'm sure that this will make for some very interesting reports on the magic of friendship." She turned to the Doctor. "You will make sure her letters get to me, won't you?"

"I'm sure I can work something out," the Doctor replied. "Trans-spatial communication is one of my specialties, after all. That and running, there's an awful lot of running."

Celestia nodded. "Then allow is to give you a parting gift."

Celestia looked to Luna, and their horns began to glow in unison. The horizon changed as the sun and moon answered their call and brought dawn to the citizens of Equestria.

In the back of the Doctor's mind a million objections fired off, arguing that what he was seeing was impossible, that it went against the basest rules of the universe, that it was just so wrong.

But when he spoke, only one word escaped his lips: "Beautiful."


Spike was awoken from his post-part nap by Twilight bursting through into the library. He groaned as she merrily ran around the hollow tree, taking all kinds of objects placing them in a suitcase.

"Spike I'm going to be gone for a while," she said as she browsed the shelves. "You'll need to watch the library for me; get along with Owlowiscious and don't eat all the diamonds, alright?"

"Uh, sure," the dragon replied. "But, where are you going?"

"I don't know."

"Okay…when will you be back?"

"I don't know."

Spike narrowed his eyes. "Wait. You're going on a trip, but, you don't know where you're going or when you'll be back?"

"That's the beauty of it, Spike!" Twilight said happily. "An expedition into the unknown, guided by the Doctor, the only pony who's seen it all! It'll be fantastic!"

"Listen to yourself, Twilight," said Spike. "You're not making any sense. You just met the Doctor yesterday. You barely know who he is!"

She stopped at the door and gave the dragon a confident grin. "Then I'm about to find out."

Twilight stepped out of the library and ran to join her friends, old and new, on an adventure unlike any other.
And here we are, at the end of my crazy, not-so-epic tale of ponies and Time Lords. It's been fun, and I hope you've enjoyed it too, because this is rather open-ended, and you know what that means. ;)

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nuke1007 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
*clap clap clap clap clap clap clap* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY YAAAAAAAAAAAY sad to see spike isn't going but sometimes 8 is a biiiiiit too mutch
mycroftxxx Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Maybe it's not-so-epic, maybe it's a little shorter that it probably should be, whatever. You came very close, closer than a lot of people who've been working very hard on it, to capturing the _exact_ point of style overlap between Doctor Who and My Little Pony.

(That what I mean when I say it's possibly too short. The Doctor has to prove himself a lot. He got off _really_ easily with Celestia et Luna, even with the much-respected opinion of Twilight to back him up. A longer story would have given the Doctor more space to prove himself. This being said, you _win_ at descriptions of why and how Luna became Nightmare Moon. Empathivores are one of the few monsters I can think of that work without needing any justification in both Whovian and Equestrian continuity. They're perfect monsters.)
Fellmoon Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
I am a moderator of a MLP:FiM RPG site and I was wondering if you would be interesting in playing a 'guest appearance' as the Doctor there for a story I plan on setting up (a one shot story, something we moderators do to keep things interesting for the players).
Sorross Featured By Owner May 14, 2012
what is this site you speek of?
Fellmoon Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Here: [link]
ToaTarkana Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am interested. Send me a note and we'll talk more.
JLWafflezBrony Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
awww!! I dont want it to end! i want to see what adventures the Mane 6 go on with The Doctor!
ToaTarkana Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, if you were to take a look in my gallery, you'd see that the adventures do continue, starting here: [link]
hgfggg Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
Awesome. Warning: Awesomeness levels critical. Increase awesomeness capactity.
ToaTarkana Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*tries best not to make an Over 9000 joke*

...crap, I did it again.
fandude12 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
very awesome now if only the bbc and hasbro made this into an actual show :D
Doctor101104 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist
Love It!!!! [link]
PuppyLoveU2 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
That was an awsome story ^.^ also read the next one and liked it as well, I hope you will make lots and lots more storys with the Pony Doctor.
sammytheconsumer Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
I am amazed beyond all belief.
asdasasefasd Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011  Student Artist
This had got to be one of the best things I have ever read. Mostly because it combines my two favourite things ever.
Jemima2050 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Ooh, I'm really excited now...
xuncu Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Student General Artist
"Come along, Ponies."
MagicaITrevor Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
MAOR CHAPTERZ?!?! (I hope)

Anyhoof, GREAT job! :icontwilightclapplz:
dialgex Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
As a Doctor Who fan, and a Brony, I have to say, I simply LOVE this.
You captured the entity of the Doctor perfectly.
If you are writing the next story, I can't wait for it to pop up!
dialgex Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
And as the Doctor would say, Allons-y!
heartsvenom Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011
I hope for a part two. Send them on some adventures with the doctor. Have a travesty happen. Shipp the mares idk but continue with this.
ToaTarkana Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I have a couple of ideas for adventures, and perhaps I'll do a travesty if I can think of a good one, but I've never been good with shipping. But don't worry, there will be more.
heartsvenom Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011
Glad to hear it.
SwiftStarLight Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*wild applause*
CTOONfan1 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011
An awesome way to end an awesome fanfiction. This really does feel like a "beginning of the season" episode of Doctor Who. And if the ending says anything, I hope for a sequel... maybe? It'd be interesting to see what would happen if the TARDIS traveled back to Earth...
2goman Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
Thing is, if it were to go back to earth they would still be ponies, and that might freek some people out, you know talking ponies and all.

So the 12th version of The Doctor is a pony, just what i've always wanted.

Oh and like the other person up there posted, you really captured The Doctor's personality, so much so that I feel like crying.
CTOONfan1 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
But the Doctor in this story is just a ponified 10th, which meant he turned into a pony because he went to Equestria. I thought by that logic if he came to Earth, he'd change back to human form, and so would the girls.
2goman Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
I never thought about it that way untill i read number 12
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